Here are a couple of examples of our comics. To view them all please visit our Writing Log.
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Showing posts with label Camp. Show all posts
Thursday, March 17, 2011
Camp Comics
This week we used the photos from camp to make a simple comic, showing highlights from last week. We needed to use thought bubbles to show 'inner thought' at a particular moment in time. When we start writing our recount it is very important to include 'inner thought'.
Here are a couple of examples of our comics. To view them all please visit our Writing Log.
Here are a couple of examples of our comics. To view them all please visit our Writing Log.
Monday, March 14, 2011
Wednesday, March 31, 2010
Confidence Course Presentations
Wow! What an afternoon! Today we presented our confidence course models to the class. Before we started we discussed the importance of speaking clearly and giving key information to our audience. Check out the videos to see how we did. We would appreciate your feedback on how we did overall, particularly in relation to the criteria we developed before we started ('The brief' on a previous post)
Xanthe, Carlotta & Gareth
Piri, Rose & Will
Lucy, Cahon & Annie
Olly, Freijah & Kieran
Matthew, Hannah & Rupert
Elspeth, Matty, Celine & Ben
Maddy, Ryan & Finn
Well done to everyone on their fantastic effort throughout the whole design and construction process.
Xanthe, Carlotta & Gareth
Piri, Rose & Will
Lucy, Cahon & Annie
Olly, Freijah & Kieran
Matthew, Hannah & Rupert
Elspeth, Matty, Celine & Ben
Maddy, Ryan & Finn
Well done to everyone on their fantastic effort throughout the whole design and construction process.
Sunday, March 28, 2010
Confidence Courses are go!
Last week Room 15 started the construction of our "Ultimate Confidence Courses". We have been working incredibly hard, starting with putting our designs onto paper. We have been working in groups to develop our courses so everyone has needed to focus on the task at hand so we don't let anyone down!
All courses are due to be finished by Tuesday so they will ready to be presented to the camera. Watch this space throughout the week for updates!
Tuesday, March 23, 2010
Sunday, March 14, 2010
Forest Lakes 2010
What a fantastic week at Forest Lakes! Beautiful weather, fantastic parents and happy children!
Tuesday, April 7, 2009
Camp Recount by Caleb
Here is just a taster of the quality writing which has been published on the Room 15 writing log. Well done Caleb!!!
The Mudslide
By Caleb Hewson
I stared up at the massive, black mudslide. Instantly I was terrified by the sight of it. Despite that I was really excited. Then I slowly began climbing up the steps, the mud squelching in between my cold toes. Eventually I reached the peak of the terror-filled mudslide. My body shaking in the wind. I fixed my eyes on the mud at the bottom. I could smell the foul stench of cow manure. Suddenly a volt of fear shot through me like electricity. Then I turned around, I could hear kids screaming and shouting in excitement! When the kids came to the top of the slide I let them past me. Scared. Cold. I didn't know what to do? Suddenly I heard a giant splash! By the looks of it I could see BenV climbing up the steps. It was my turn. I was horrified but I forced myself. I could see the detergent dribbling down the slide like a snake. Anyway I jumped and landed on the slide. I was zooming down as fast as a jaguar could run! The freezing water was spraying up in my face. Without time to think about anything I hit the mud! It was cold and awful. So I immediately hurried out of the water like a hungry jackal looking for food. “Man that was awesome!!!!” I screeched. Then I sprinted up the muddy path again and went on the awesome fun-filled mudslide again. After about fifty goes I thought it was the best and most fun slide ever!!I was so proud of myself and so were my friends.
By Caleb Hewson
The Mudslide
By Caleb Hewson
I stared up at the massive, black mudslide. Instantly I was terrified by the sight of it. Despite that I was really excited. Then I slowly began climbing up the steps, the mud squelching in between my cold toes. Eventually I reached the peak of the terror-filled mudslide. My body shaking in the wind. I fixed my eyes on the mud at the bottom. I could smell the foul stench of cow manure. Suddenly a volt of fear shot through me like electricity. Then I turned around, I could hear kids screaming and shouting in excitement! When the kids came to the top of the slide I let them past me. Scared. Cold. I didn't know what to do? Suddenly I heard a giant splash! By the looks of it I could see BenV climbing up the steps. It was my turn. I was horrified but I forced myself. I could see the detergent dribbling down the slide like a snake. Anyway I jumped and landed on the slide. I was zooming down as fast as a jaguar could run! The freezing water was spraying up in my face. Without time to think about anything I hit the mud! It was cold and awful. So I immediately hurried out of the water like a hungry jackal looking for food. “Man that was awesome!!!!” I screeched. Then I sprinted up the muddy path again and went on the awesome fun-filled mudslide again. After about fifty goes I thought it was the best and most fun slide ever!!I was so proud of myself and so were my friends.
By Caleb Hewson
Monday, April 6, 2009
Our Writing Blog Has Started!
We have finally got our writing blog underway! Please click on the link in the sidebar to view writing that has been written by members of Room 15. Hopefully there are no errors (or very few) in our writing because we have worked through the entire writing process of planning, drafting, editing, re-crafting, conferencing and publishing.
Our first examples of writing are from our recount unit where we wrote about our experiences from Forest Lakes Camp.
We would love for you to leave a comment and give us feedback on our work.
Tuesday, March 17, 2009
Camp 09
We had a sensational time at camp last week. Everyone had a ball!! Check out the photos of the big week...these more to come!!
Wednesday, January 28, 2009
Welcome to 2009
Welcome to 2009 and Room 15's brand new blog! I hope you all had a fantastic holiday. Im looking forward to catching up with all of you when school starts next week.
Our big Idea for this year is 'Making a Difference'. We start the year with making a difference to our peers and ourselves. Our Inquiry focus for this term is of course Camp which happens from March 10th to 13th.
Our Key Competency focus is Managing Self
How are you going to make a difference to yourself and others at camp?
Our big Idea for this year is 'Making a Difference'. We start the year with making a difference to our peers and ourselves. Our Inquiry focus for this term is of course Camp which happens from March 10th to 13th.
Our Key Competency focus is Managing Self
How are you going to make a difference to yourself and others at camp?
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